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DeadlyRukia
04-05-2008, 05:46 PM
this is a draw of a boy in my school xD, i used to like him x]
so i did this =D [i know u don't want to know this so... blah blah blah]
plz don't said that it sucks or someting like that,i would be very sad :cry

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u201/rita22_2/Img002-12.jpg

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u201/rita22_2/Img000-12.jpg

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u201/rita22_2/Img001-15.jpg

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u201/rita22_2/Img002-13.jpg


this is my first draw of real people...
ManBearPig
04-05-2008, 06:01 PM
The left side (for me) of his face looks weird.
DeadlyRukia
04-05-2008, 06:09 PM
yeah it is weird i noticed that and his lips and his eye xDD there r lots of defects xD
ManBearPig
04-05-2008, 06:58 PM
Yeah that's what I meant. Everything left from the nose looks kinda deformed. You could erase it and draw it again.
DeadlyRukia
04-05-2008, 07:06 PM
no... is face is like that... it was like :notrust is mouth was like that but his eyes were not like that xDD
Fazal-sama
04-05-2008, 09:18 PM
Much better than my work :D
DeadlyRukia
04-05-2008, 11:05 PM
i don't think so ._.
xD
shinigami13
04-05-2008, 11:12 PM
its good lol,if you just woulda made his face look more like it was turning
DeadlyRukia
04-05-2008, 11:16 PM
yeah i think so i would try^^
xD
Thantos-Espada
04-09-2008, 09:58 AM
Awsome^^

Really likeing the line art. And For a real life drawing its better than most drawings i could do^^. (nods)



Oki^^ dont take any of this badly^^


First the mouth - if u look the eyes and the mouth are at different angles...#

this is because u tried drawing the whole face on an angle right?^^ (brilliant effort)

yet, even if the face is on an angle all parts of the face should be on that same angle...


so if your eyes are straight


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then the mouth should be at the same angle as the eyes.


in your drawing, becuase he is turning, you have drawn the eyes alsmost straight but the mouth slightly more inclined^^. (means mouths wonky^^)

its not a huge deal^^ but next time (this is just an idea)

try using the Cross face format, draw your basic head


then draw a line for the eyes a line for the mouth and a line going down the middle for nose..

this should keep every thing on the same angle.^^


Give it a try, but i hope your carry on drawing you have talent and i beleive you will be awsome >.<