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vonix
04-01-2008, 03:45 AM
the thread for discussing and commenting on the collaboration if you want to join ask me here!
you must ask me if you want to join unless i asked you to join!
Shapeshifter
04-01-2008, 03:46 AM
Joined! :P
kk tell me what the whole setting and plot is for this thing? i need to be informed! :P
vonix
04-02-2008, 04:11 AM
plot-make up as we go XD
current setting-outside of a town we had lived in for years that was destroyed so we could kill some dangerous hollows that blew up the town
Shapeshifter
04-02-2008, 05:05 AM
*nods* Ok, sounds good. lol, this sounds pretty interesting! = ) Whatever happened to the JWP?
the JWP wasnt closed or anything, people just stopped writing, but now with both VK and rvngu back from their school duties i hope they will start to write again.
vonix
04-13-2008, 07:43 PM
yay the collab is active again!
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-13-2008, 07:52 PM
And apparently there are vampires...>_>
*slightly evil chuckle*
Gol D. Roger
04-13-2008, 08:29 PM
So if I want to, should I just jump in?
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-13-2008, 08:34 PM
I...guess. That's what I did. I waited for a good cliffhanger moment, and jumped in.
Gol D. Roger
04-13-2008, 10:01 PM
Hehe, it looks like between the three vamp characters, we could keep writing indefinitely. ;)
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-13-2008, 10:07 PM
Yeah, I guess we could...
vonix
04-13-2008, 10:27 PM
ok people i said this before ASK ME BEFORE JOINING!! hana i told u to join so u can, ceria i told could join to and luv and soz and couch and shape they are the only ones allowed to post!
Gol D. Roger
04-13-2008, 10:29 PM
Okay, well... May I join please?
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-13-2008, 10:32 PM
:um
I'm sorry, Von-kun.
vonix
04-13-2008, 10:40 PM
hana-its ok
gol-i would have to be crazy to say no to one as talented as you are
Vonix: :hug
O.O..................
Gol D. Roger
04-13-2008, 10:49 PM
hana-its ok
gol-i would have to be crazy to say no to one as talented as you are
:yay
Thanks a lot, man. Glad you're enjoying it. :D
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-13-2008, 10:51 PM
Yeah, you do have a good writing style, Brother!
Gol D. Roger
04-13-2008, 11:01 PM
Thanks, sis! :p
You're not so bad yourself. ;)
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-13-2008, 11:03 PM
>/////>
Don't say that.
vonix
04-13-2008, 11:26 PM
my next ava will show wut my chara looks like just my chara has 2 wings not 1 XD if i can find the pic if not ill show him w/out wings
Gol D. Roger
04-13-2008, 11:28 PM
My character was originally an Arrancar I'd come up with. I've got a picture of him in Arrancar form, sans goatee, so maybe I'll post that up when I get a chance to scan it.
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-13-2008, 11:32 PM
I'll find a pic ((more professional..A.K.A. not my art)) as my avatar that is mine, also.
vonix
04-13-2008, 11:33 PM
damn cant find a pic of him w/his wings oh well
CeriaHalcyon
04-13-2008, 11:39 PM
I don't really have an image of my character, perhaps maybe Haji from Blood+ that's probably the closest to who i am
you dont really know where all of this is going right?
vonix
04-13-2008, 11:56 PM
were wut is going? our story is made up as we go its much more fun this way
as it seems...i wonder if you will fight nazi zombies later.
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-13-2008, 11:59 PM
Ehh, this is what her face looks like. I have full body pictures, but they are too large.
Gol D. Roger
04-14-2008, 12:11 AM
as it seems...i wonder if you will fight nazi zombies later.
Well, we've got vampires, so we're already halfway to Hellsing. ;)
vonix
04-14-2008, 12:14 AM
no zombies!!
my ava is my chara w/wings hidden
CeriaHalcyon
04-14-2008, 12:23 AM
/ This is Haji, the soul who is currently playing the role of Ceria
\
vonix
04-14-2008, 12:26 AM
cool......ceria,hana we should allie! i have a plan for soz and he is NOT a vampire
robots vs zombies
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y223/MALLET_MAN/zvr_sample.jpg
just an idea...
vonix
04-14-2008, 12:47 AM
shdo u wanna join in the fun?
Gol D. Roger
04-14-2008, 12:48 AM
This is what Rogerro looks like, Arrancar style:
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/6821/rogerrowk7.jpg
If you imagine him with darker hair and a goatee instead of the facial markings, that's pretty much what he'd look like in the story. Aside from the Arrancar outfit, Hollow hole, and broken mask, of course. ;)
Shapeshifter
04-14-2008, 12:50 AM
lolz!!! Wow, what did i miss?? It seems the collab just exploded with peoples!! yayz!
Shape, you and I are going to team up okay my hubby
Shapeshifter
04-14-2008, 12:55 AM
agreed my dear e-wife!!
ill ruin it if ill put in any more elements and beside...iam sleepy. gg
vonix
04-14-2008, 12:55 AM
shape i snatched hana in she brout ceria and gol randomly joined
:yay We are going to kick major hollow ass
vonix
04-14-2008, 12:58 AM
lol we meed to ALLIE DAMN IT HANA NEEDS TO POST
Oh.. maybe I can become evil later on, and take my hubby along for the ride....bwahahahaha
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 01:09 AM
Is it the one you told me, Von-kun?
Anyway, My avvie is my chars face, but
THIS ---> http://inlinethumb62.webshots.com/6973/2316011920101153531S425x425Q85.jpg (http://travel.webshots.com/photo/2316011920101153531LBlaYC)
is her full outfit.
Ja.
OKAY OKAY! Geez, Von!
vonix
04-14-2008, 01:12 AM
is it what one? im confused..... :crazy
Shapeshifter
04-14-2008, 01:14 AM
well since we are posting reference pictures :P
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/CoryPiecek/Seraf.jpg
vonix
04-14-2008, 01:20 AM
no spoiler tags just post it
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 01:25 AM
...Wait. Nevermind, I was thinking about something else.
vonix
04-14-2008, 01:27 AM
lol hana you and i need to allie our teams
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 01:36 AM
Mmmkay, I'll do that...
Gol D. Roger
04-14-2008, 01:38 AM
I'm taking off for the night, so assume Rogerro goes along with whatever developments occur if you guys keep on writing.
Shapeshifter
04-14-2008, 01:49 AM
night dude
vonix
04-14-2008, 01:59 AM
jeeze collab really took off thank you hana and ceria
CeriaHalcyon
04-14-2008, 02:16 AM
no problemo, i find it interesting, and a good way to practice my writing
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 02:42 AM
=^.^=
Same here! It's good practice for writing my fantasy book!
CeriaHalcyon
04-14-2008, 02:44 AM
=^.^=
Same here! It's good practice for writing my fantasy book!
Noo way, i'm writing one also, my screen name is the name of my main character
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 02:48 AM
Really? That's weird but cool!!
The two main characters of mine are Siobhan and Ashtyn, they're sisters.
vonix
04-14-2008, 02:49 AM
nice location ceria
and good luck w/ur books
CeriaHalcyon
04-14-2008, 02:51 AM
:yay Hana's with me in the moonlight!
Vonix: Shape and I are done. I guess next time we can see eachother...
vonix
04-14-2008, 02:55 AM
ok luv this is a good story
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 02:57 AM
Hey, is my writing alright...?
Ok, well, I don't plan on writing anything after Shape's chapter. So you can always just write in your point of view how you saw as both of us walked in or something....
vonix
04-14-2008, 03:01 AM
hana-yeah everyones doin good soz just isnt used to writing.....
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 03:03 AM
*phew!*
Okay then. I just was hoping that I wasn't making a fool out of myself...>_>;;
CeriaHalcyon
04-14-2008, 03:05 AM
*phew!*
Okay then. I just was hoping that I wasn't making a fool out of myself...>_>;;
Yeah you're doing good hana, this is my first time trying something like this also, so we're both new...
vonix
04-14-2008, 03:06 AM
no ur relly good at writing hana
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 03:06 AM
*smiles*
Thanks...
vonix
04-14-2008, 03:15 AM
well im goin to sleep cuz i got school tomorrow
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 03:24 AM
*stretches because I have Spring Break..FINALLY!*
Gute Nacht, Von-kun.
Shapeshifter
04-14-2008, 03:24 AM
this is dark and spooky, but is love/revenge themed, idk, but it just seemed to fit the mood of ur guys characters or sumtin :P
Lurid Enchantment (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uB-3Cew5Irk)
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 03:28 AM
Oh, dear, I LOVE that song.
Le Portrait de Petite Cossette...I might need to start watching that...I'll just skip the bloody-fest parts...
Danke, Shapeshifter!!
CeriaHalcyon
04-14-2008, 03:46 AM
Danke, arigato, Shape, that was one powerfully deep song!
Guten Nacht Hana-chan, and shape as well!
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 03:47 AM
:hug
Nacht, Ceria-kun~!
I have a question, do we have an ENEMY? As in a real bad guy in the STORY?
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 03:59 AM
*shrugs shoulders* I guess the vampires are enemies of the shinigami, and so forth, so.....I guess I am one of the bad people.
Aah! Have you guys heard of Kanon Wakeshima?
Ehhh...actually, it's 11:30 here, so...I think I shall retire for the night.
See you guys tomorrow.
CeriaHalcyon
04-14-2008, 04:50 PM
*shrugs shoulders* I guess the vampires are enemies of the shinigami, and so forth, so.....I guess I am one of the bad people.
Aah! Have you guys heard of Kanon Wakeshima?
Ehhh...actually, it's 11:30 here, so...I think I shall retire for the night.
See you guys tomorrow.
Since all the characters are here, it would stand to reason that the shinigami and the vampir are bound to lock horns. that's an interesting combination....wink wink at Kubo....he did do the bounto which were similar but not true vampires.
alright then, let's see who the strongest immortals are!
Hana-chan, i haven't heard of that but i will check it out later.
(i snuck on at work to say hi!)
All right then, we shall be ENEMIES til the END!!! :yell
This is going to be so much fun!!:yay
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 06:22 PM
Oooh! Ceria-kun! You bad person! >XDD
The Bounto? *has never watched that Arc, but has heard of them*
And to Luv, yes, we shall be enemies, but civilized enemies, I pray.
vonix
04-14-2008, 08:22 PM
wow ...........
Gol D. Roger
04-14-2008, 09:39 PM
Noo way, i'm writing one also, my screen name is the name of my main character
Heh, same here. Although luckily I'm not on my own with that one, I've had a writing partner since I was a little kid. Internet ftw.
On my own, I write screenplays, which I love. And I write in any genre that piques my interest.
But yeah, when it comes to straight prose fiction, for me it's fantasy or bust.
Aaaanyway... I'm gonna go check out what's happening in the actual writing thread now. :)
vonix
04-14-2008, 10:09 PM
oh just so you guys know this is not the spam section so stay mostly on topic
CeriaHalcyon
04-14-2008, 10:18 PM
I got ya vonix-sama, but you can't deny the fact this place kinda feels like the green room, or a behind the studio lounge where we can chill and discuss things and then go on stage...lol...
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-14-2008, 10:21 PM
Yeah. I guess we're just actors performing on stage, and this is the common room?
Gah, thanks for letting me join this collab, Von-kun! I've never written so much storyline before!!
CeriaHalcyon
04-14-2008, 10:25 PM
Thanks Vonix!
Gol D. Roger
04-15-2008, 01:24 AM
Erm, just so you guys know, Rogerro's off flying around, being emo. Just wanted to mention that since you're talking to him and he's not there. No worries, hehe. :D
I'm a bit busy today, so it was my way of extricating him from the action for a little while.
CeriaHalcyon
04-15-2008, 01:27 AM
Yeah no problem, i forgot about the fact you had him flying so i made a minor course correction, but he can be flying off now.
vonix
04-15-2008, 03:56 AM
i added a new twist to the story i think ceria will like the first part of it XD
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-15-2008, 04:00 AM
*smiles and nods*
I can't write until my hubby writes. We are working as a team together, plus, he is my inspiration...
vonix
04-15-2008, 04:21 AM
luv you should go comment on my poem
ceria-you dont seem to trust my chara... why could that be?
VONIX: O.o You wrote a poem? interesting
vonix
04-15-2008, 04:33 AM
luv-its the crummy version but yea....still decent
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-15-2008, 04:38 AM
Meh. It's almost midnight, and I've got to go with my Dad for his doctor's appointment.
Gute Nacht...
Still confused to this whole writing thing! I PMed that other guy Shdo about his, can I join (me joining also requires guiding me through this). Still a noob to this how you say... forum writing/role playing?
vonix
04-15-2008, 04:47 AM
nazo-will you stay active? if u suddenly disappear w/out telling us and you are gone for a wile then we may kill you off
if you agree send me a pm telling me about ur chara and asking whatever questions you may have
im goin to sleep ill reply to ur pm wen i get on tomorrow
lol I sent you a PM before you posted this but uh, I'll send another one with everything on it. Thank you very much. And yes I do stay active, I hate for other people to kill of my chars (IT HAPPENS TO ME TOO MUCH!)
vonix
04-15-2008, 05:00 AM
oh he just brought up a good point YOU CANNOT KILL EACHOTHERS CHARAS but you can mortally wound them and you cant take over their char in one of your posts you can have them do minor things but you cant do anything major w/another persons chaq unless you have permission breaking this rule gets you kicked out of the collab
Yargh me matey I tried to read some of your RP but I don't understand! This is a vampire RP or a Shinigami like RP!? I see hollows at the beginning but something about councils. Give me a recap quickly (If you're still awake x.x)
LOL
Well, its a shinigami versus vampire thing, I think, I really don't know how the plot is being set up either, can someone please explain.............
lol Someone responded!? OMFG! Someones awake. Anyways. Yush, I am totally confused, and bored... -sets down his cocoa looking at the other 500 empty mugs- This stuff isn't helping me sleep either. So... no one understands wtf we're doing?
Well, first off, how about you choose a side... be with me, SHINIGAMI and we kick ass, or be with THEM VAMPIRES and they kick ass too... so... your choice.
Now, as far as my character is concerned...I am a BITCH and its hard for me to trust ppl.
Rawr well. Guess what my name means (Don't bother you probably can't). I'm DEFINITELY joining the Shinigamis. (They need to add Shinigami to the dictionary... on a site about Shinigamis... these red lines are annoying me.) As far as my char goes, he's not into doing a plethora of stuff. Short and to the point (Notice I skipped sweet).
vonix
04-15-2008, 11:13 AM
alrite people if you have any questions please pm me them and they shall be taken care of shortly
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-15-2008, 03:30 PM
*sighs* I'm just going along with Ceria's lead.
I don't mind the conversation our Vampir characters are having, though...
Not many shinigamis here. I guess more people wanted to be a Vampir?
*shrugs shoulders*
Soooooooooooo............. when / how will I introduce mah character...? not really sure what's going on in your guy's RP. Ceria and like Hana are vampires and someone got their wings back, and then Hana's fathers on the council and she hates him or something... yush, but how do I introduce my character (If I even should yet).
k. hana is the doughter of one of the 13 council members, ceria is her rouge lover, roggeto is her brother and there is the father who wants her back for some reason.
then who is vonix? cuz i have an idea for something and when i read i just get lost.
Yo uhm... when do I introduce my character, should I wait for a cliff hanger, or an opening for someone to come in?
CeriaHalcyon
04-15-2008, 07:29 PM
Yo Nazo, check with vonix, he's the creator of this collaboration, just so he knows what you're up to and can work you into the plot.
have a nice day!
No I mean. I already asked him wtf to to, and he says introduce it during the plot, but when!? I dont just run in and kill that council member and be like "BITCH ASS, YO COUNCIL SUCKS I PITY DA FOO" And then grow wings and fly away. So... when ever Vonix replies, I guess I'll wait for now. (I wouldnt mind running in like dat tho). I tried doing that captain contest btw. O.O Criticize me on that please.
the captain contest is not related to this.
anyways this is very chaotic i dont know how and if i can join.
lol Im sooooo bored. I am trying to get my friends on my other game to role play, but they're all like zoned out and won't speak english to me. Sooooo- Faster the better, so I dont splode from stuff...nstuff.yah.
vonix
04-15-2008, 08:55 PM
like i said pm me your questions!
introduce your character when it would make the most sense (like right now) and you cant come in and kill a powerful char like hanas father
shdo-my chara is a vampir that was disguised as a shinigami and is one of hanas old friends who happens to be a member of the council of vampirs
any more questions?
yah one more question. The hell? Right now? Like randomly have him go do something. But I'm not even sure the current situation, and how powerful is he allowed to be?! And should he be with the gotei 13 let alone soul society?
vonix
04-15-2008, 10:14 PM
he cannot be the most powerful chara the vampirs are currently the most powerful species but that is subject to change.
And we have absolutely NO CONTACT WITH ANY BLEACH CHARACTERS!
So am I allowed to go into the real thing and just start RPing as my character?
http://br.youtube.com/watch?v=hReROJQpSow&feature=related cute baby.
vonix
04-15-2008, 11:46 PM
shdo may i remind you this is NOT the spam section so please stay relatively on topic
its an evil eye...it is on topic.
vonix
04-16-2008, 12:05 AM
to others it is off topic shdo cuz they dont know about the evil eye
just so you all know my collab chara is in my new sggy pick he is at back right w/the black wing just my chara has 2 wings
Nice.....
Very nice...
Evil eye I mean.
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-16-2008, 04:50 PM
*sigh* Sorry guys. I can't post until my fiancee does.
=__=
Now I'm being chased by my Dad. Oh, great. *goes to find weaponry*
Bo'ed mates. I notice I have de-activate my signature (points to Shdo) -_- What is that I see there!? Not his. (In the actual collaboration). Sorry, just kidding, dun mean to be a douche, just bored. I need to jump in and slice someone's head off some where (I don't mind not slicing off someones head, but I still would like to jump in). Suggestion, if I am allowed to intervene, would be appreciated. x_x (If I'm annoying you with these posts I'll stop lol)
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-17-2008, 01:07 PM
Aheheh, that German word I used in my latest post?
...
You don't want to know what it means.
Well, one hint.
It's "Those 'sons of *******'"
..
But spelled out.
*hits myself for cursing*
CeriaHalcyon
04-18-2008, 04:07 AM
Hey Everyone, i just wanted to let you know i'll be gone until sunday... feel free to Use Ceria and hopefully you can make it to safe refuge, Vonix and Hana, you guys have fun!
vonix
04-19-2008, 03:36 AM
OK PPLZ THE NAME vladimir must be removed from the collab it turns out tht is a member of the forums real name and he is NOT happy so were replacing tht name just change it to ???? for now ok?
maybe Vlad? like the imapler guy? the one that dracula is actually based on?
Gol D. Roger
04-19-2008, 01:24 PM
Sorry I've been MIA the past couple days, been laid up with a really awful cold. My brain's just not functioning at the moment. I'll be back to posting soon. And I'll change the Vladimir stuff in my posts. Is Vlad okay, or does Vladimir want us to go with something entirely different?
vonix
04-19-2008, 01:35 PM
lets play it safe and just make a copletely new name
could you ask him? and at the same time ask him what other names he see offensive (maybe its his brother name or something and other names will also wont be good and i am not going to change this again and again) so ask him if vlad is okay and if not then ask him what other names are not fine (cuz victor or marcus are also good names for vampires and it would be really annoying if those names would be also rejected after we do change them.)
vonix
04-19-2008, 01:54 PM
were usin marcus ppl can complain but i dont care then its marcus pplz so change it!
have you asked him about it? cuz if he comes again and complain over a name in a fictional story again i will not change it and he will need to ask some1 else to change it. i mean what there is to complain about? he is a vampire LORD that cannot die, seriously and what will we do about the rest of the council? do us a favor and ask now what names are offensive so we wont have to do this again.
Gol D. Roger
04-19-2008, 04:31 PM
Changing to Marcus.
vonix
04-19-2008, 04:35 PM
yes we are.........hey gol want a siggy? aka a sig pic
Gol D. Roger
04-19-2008, 04:40 PM
I'm waiting for the results of the Captain contest. Been finishing a drawing of my character, and once it's done and I've hopefully made Captain or VC, I want to get a sig made up with that. Thanks though, if your offer's still open by then, I'd be happy to accept.
Also, I've gone ahead and changed all mention of Vladimir to Marcus. For Ceria and Hana in particular, however, since they have a lot more posts, I don't know how fair it is to ask them to go through line by line and change every Vladimir. Can we just agree to call him Marcus from now on?
CeriaHalcyon
04-20-2008, 08:28 PM
I'm agreeable to that suggestion Roger, as for vonix, i left things a little open for you, i dunno what your train of thought might be as to why i might be moving the three of them along the ground rather than the air, so i left it to you.
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-20-2008, 08:54 PM
Marcus, right?
Okay, then, I'll change it.
I don't want to offend anyone here...
vonix
04-20-2008, 09:20 PM
ceria-i got writers block -.-
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-20-2008, 09:22 PM
*laughs*
Oh, don't worry!
Every writer gets them!!
vonix
04-20-2008, 09:25 PM
i leave it to hana to explain XD
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-20-2008, 09:35 PM
DDD:<
NO!
I can't figure out an explanation either!!!
*runs to try to find an explanation suitable enough*
CeriaHalcyon
04-21-2008, 02:12 AM
Ok everyone, sorry bout that mixup, i took care of it!
vonix
04-21-2008, 02:51 AM
i hate this cough.....
CeriaHalcyon
04-21-2008, 05:06 PM
Is someone going to continue or should i edit it again?
vonix
04-21-2008, 09:28 PM
ok ill go read ur edit and maybe post
Hana Ryuuzaki
04-22-2008, 02:51 AM
Neh, sorry, sorry, Ceria-kun.
I forgot to read it again!!
*goes to read*
vonix
04-22-2008, 09:18 PM
i cant think of a post for it =(
CeriaHalcyon
04-23-2008, 01:06 AM
fine then, i'll continue it
vonix
04-23-2008, 08:37 PM
ok thanks ceria
CeriaHalcyon
04-23-2008, 11:43 PM
I was thinking, what if i had the three of them run into some vampir minions? not really meant to capture them but to keep them on their toes?
vonix
04-23-2008, 11:52 PM
do what ever but keep in mind if you do not have permission you cannot make others charas do basically anything.......
CeriaHalcyon
04-24-2008, 05:34 PM
Umm, can someone say major plot twist?
*Ceria takes a bow*
vonix
04-24-2008, 08:27 PM
no comment on my random murder of a chara?
CeriaHalcyon
04-25-2008, 08:03 PM
Sorry man, i didnt understand where you were going with that, as you might've also found difficulty in my own writings, but i will clarify it later on ok!
vonix
05-07-2008, 11:37 PM
ok well nazo shall be killed shortly i just need to work it in better than last time and only I can kill him
Hana Ryuuzaki
05-08-2008, 02:39 AM
...I LIVE!!!
Okay, I need to re-read the collab, so I can start writing again...
vonix
05-08-2008, 02:48 AM
hana your my friend your chara is unkillable
Hana Ryuuzaki
05-08-2008, 03:24 AM
...I know that.
I was saying that I, myself actually am still alive.
^_^;;
vonix
05-08-2008, 03:33 AM
oh ok
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