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Luhy
03-12-2008, 02:02 AM
I fall asleep thinking of you
Dreaming of things I wish were true

The days have past,
The nights have came,

I have no image of you in my picture frame
So I can think of my love while I rest?

I think in my dreams I shall do this best!
When I dream of you

I see us together,
When I dream of you

I want this forever,
When I dream of you

There's no one else in my past,
When I dream of you

Our love shall last,
But in reality this is restricted,

Our love is supposed to be,
But it has never been this way for me,

I want to show my love for the world to see,
Tell me what to do,

Cause I don't only want this...
When I dream of you

melboyd~
03-14-2008, 09:28 AM
this one seems like it flowed directly from ur brain and then onto the paper >_< still, a pretty blunt wordings makes a poem unique ^^....i can't rep* yet.

Luhy
03-14-2008, 07:09 PM
mmhm, i try not to use imagery or symbolism as much anymore ;p after seeing how popular "This Girl" and "Molly" were X3