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Luhy
03-07-2008, 06:58 AM
Her mommy loved her
That's all she knew
She loved her new daddy
Until he made her blue

She used to sit with her mommy
And listen to princess stories
She used to hug her mommy tight
And take away her mommy's worries

There was nothing a hug
Couldn't help or heal
Her favorite stuffed bear
The only thing she could feel

You see poor Molly
Kept a deep dark a secret
Her new daddy would touch her
And fill her with regret

One day she said "No!"
And decided to fight
He raised up his fist
And used all his might

She lay on the floor
Holding her best friend
Caressing his soft fur
As she smiled... It was the end

Her mommy came home
Working a long hard day
Realizing how much she missed her baby
And wanting some time with her to play

She found her body
Bloody and curled up
She called the police
But then just hung up

She left her daughters body
And flew across the state
Taking her new husband
And cheating her fate

Molly was buried weeks later
Best wishes her cousins would send
She was buried holding her bear
Her one and only true friend

couch_kamote
03-07-2008, 07:05 AM
Poor little girl. Her mother left her for her step dad who abuses and rapes her. :wtf

Luhy
03-07-2008, 07:10 AM
I should add what this story was about...

I had read a Reader's Digest story once... It was a very uplifting story about a sweet little girl and how she was the one thing that kept her mom from killing herself or going back to drugs... and then one day she died from child abuse... this poem is about the harsh reality abused children face...

shinikage
03-07-2008, 07:49 AM
It feels so lonely. I like it. The ending is so sad, espescially the 'buried holding her bear, her one and only true friend' part.

Luhy
03-07-2008, 07:59 AM
mmmhm... it is very sad... I wanted to make something more upbeat but i turned out writing something depressing... lol x.x

melboyd~
03-07-2008, 08:01 AM
it's kind of sad that she only had her teddy with her till she died. her mom could at least bury her before she left with another man. i like the poem too >.> agreed with shini, the last lines is the most significant. reps*

edit: hm, i need to spread the reps to others first :yell

Luhy
03-07-2008, 08:02 AM
Mmmhm, I like ending with something touching... glad you liked it ^^ yay for reps XP