Luhy
03-04-2008, 12:14 AM
(This is a mock-poem of Edgar Allan Poe's "The Raven"... This is just the very start, but I wanna hear what people think since I need to stop for a while :p)
Silently, I saunter, listless, I wander.
Abstractly I conceive, what my mind doth deceive.
To what, my palaver, could be such the matter?
Be gone eerie chatter! Mocking thine cadaver…
To whom did I incur, such an unfilial clatter?
Quietly he snickers, my mind’s eye forced to flicker,
Whilst waters rise, I pull upon mine knickers.
Downpours and flurries, awakening crepuscule worries.
Emitted rumble, shriek and mumble, mediation I fumble,
It’s but a squirrel, sardonic of thine undertaking!
Silently, I saunter, listless, I wander.
Abstractly I conceive, what my mind doth deceive.
To what, my palaver, could be such the matter?
Be gone eerie chatter! Mocking thine cadaver…
To whom did I incur, such an unfilial clatter?
Quietly he snickers, my mind’s eye forced to flicker,
Whilst waters rise, I pull upon mine knickers.
Downpours and flurries, awakening crepuscule worries.
Emitted rumble, shriek and mumble, mediation I fumble,
It’s but a squirrel, sardonic of thine undertaking!