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Shdo
03-01-2008, 01:42 PM
this is a story i made in BF...ill start moving my stories from there to here in the next days. first 2 chapters



Blood stained


Chapter 1


The reception girl sat on her chair and waited, nothing interesting happens all day so what a girl can do? She took her fingernail polish and started grooming herself, nothing will happen today…
She heard a noise and quickly hid her nail polish and looked behind her, "crap, is it the damned inspector guy? They always looking for me…" there wasn’t any one there.


"Greeting mortal!" the sudden voice surprised her and she released a sudden shriek, "I wish to join the gotei 13, what are the procedures?"


"dammit! you scared me…" she looked back to the front of the desk at the stranger, her heart dropped, in front of her stood roughly 2 meters tall a monster, green eyes with silted pupils, scaly skin and a smile that reached from ear to ear reveling a row of sharp teeth, "A...A...A HOLLOW!"


"I am no hollow…" she might have heard him if she had stopped screaming but its seemed she wasn’t planning on stopping anytime soon, so the creature slapped her sending her to the floor, "would you be quite? I am no hollow but if you continue with these vocal exercises I'll be forced to gag you with a blunt object," she looked at him with big sad eyes.


"It hurts…" she sobbed.


"So does childbirth, so I would advise against it."


After couple of minutes the girl gathered herself up and started the official procedures, "so…you want to join the gotei 13?" The answer was an attempt to slap her again, an attempt she evaded almost gracefully, "what is your problem! BAKA!"


"Oh I thought you are trying to annoy me again with stupid questions," the serpent man answered.


"Just stop trying to hit me okay? So I need you to answer some questions to fill your application," she sobbed a little but continued with the question phase, "your age?"


"ETERNAL!"


"Are you going to answer this seriously?" she asked with a crocked look, the creature saw it as something else and raised his hand, "FINE ETERNAL!... name?"


"The blood serpent, bringer of dawn, consumer of men, master of light, he who father of you all…" she had to stop his never ending blabber somehow.


"Anything shorter?" a hand was lifted; "BECAUSE THERE IS NO PLACE ON THE APPLICATION!" a hand was lowered.


"Ezzo coatl."


"Place of birth?" she asked fearfully.


"He who is eternal cannot be born."


"I'll write unknown…what about a zanpakutou? Do you have one?"


"No, I don’t have a zanpakutou."


The continues conversation was about an hour as Ezzo arm rising and lowering from time to time…she didn’t liked him. "Very well, your application is ready just go and drop it at the guy who sleeps over there."


Ezzo approached the sleeping man, girls do nail polish and guys sleep as it seems, "I wish to give you this application to join the gotei 13, do you accept?" the sleepy man woke up rubbed his eyes and look at the man who woke at him, holding the application at his hand, then he noticed the man wasn’t a man but a thing, so he screamed, the girl knew what was coming and giggled as the application guy was sent to the floor with a massive slap, she didn’t really liked the application guy.

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"Welcome! You are the students of the 2154th shinigami academy cycle, you will go through a extensive training in hand to hand combat, healing and destructive magic and the use of blades, train well and you will become an official shinigami of the gotei 13, this is all, go to your rooms and tomorrow you start training."


Ezzo dragged his legs to his room, he didn’t even started and already he hated this place, everyone gave him looks like he was a monster, talked behind his back, it was clear that he won't fit in, after all his roommates somehow succeeded in finding other places to sleep in, he had a room only to himself.


"SCREW ALL YOU FUCKERS I DON’T NEED YOUR ROOMS, assholes," the door was barged and a little red hair girl with a filthy mouth entered the rooms with her stuff, she looked at Ezzo who laid on his bad, "what the hell are you?"


"A god."


"Okay…" she dropped her stuff and started to undress, "if those assholes think they can put me with a bunch of first district sluts they got it wrong, stupid fuckers…hey what they hell are you doing?"


"I am trying to sleep…unsuccessfully…" she couldn’t believe him because his eyes were completely open, to her it looked like he was the worst peeper in the world.


"You know your eyes are open? Stupid fuck, get the hell out of my room!" apparently she was kicked out of her room for being a poor socializer.


"This is my room, I don’t mind you being here but I am not leaving my room, I find it warm and strategically well placed and I sleep with my eyes open."


"LIAR! What a stupid fuck you are! You think you can fool me? You are a fucking pervert," the half naked woman gave him a seductive posture, just to tease and then grabbed ezzo tail, trying to make him stand in order to kick him out of the room, "you are…taller than I thought, fuc…"


"you assume I care if you are naked or if you are a she or a he, well I don’t, I don’t mind if you stay here, I don’t mind if every second word that come out of your mouth is a curse word but when you try to take something that belong to me…" he stared at her with basilisk eyes, fear started to creep into her.


"Hey! Listen, those lies won't work on me I know you…" the ear to ear smile, who wasn’t a smile only a surgical cut over the cheeks, wasn’t there only for cosmetic look, it could be opened, inches before her face a maw of teeth roared at her, dropping her to her feet, "what the hell are you?!"


"I told you…I am a god, NOW SHUT UP AND LET ME SLEEP!"



To be continued…



Chapter 2


"wake up, we have morning exercise to attend to," Ezzo tried to shake the girl who mumbled 'fuckers' from her sleep, it looked cute in Ezzo eyes, mostly because he didn’t knew what a fucker was, if he knew he might have kill her.


"What hour is it?" the sleepy girl asked as she dragged herself to the bathroom.


"Its 10 minutes to 7 we have 10 minutes to…"


"WHAT THE FUCK! 10 minutes?! You wake me 10 minutes before time? I won't have time to fix my pretty face!" she whined at Ezzo as if he could turn time, "DO something!"


"sorry my godly jurisdiction apply to crops rotation and sun based stuff, not time, besides if you need time to fix your pretty face then that mean its isn’t pretty and you are wasting your time…" somehow it sounded logical to her and she just put her cloths and head out.


"so what is this day class? Introduction?" the girl asked Ezzo who didn’t give a damn, they entered the room, this is their class, full of boring people with the same eye and hair color, the entrance of these two colorful (one pretty and one dreadful) made everyone look at the entrance. Across the room there was what seems like a small gathering of girls and boys, the center was Yuji Akihabra, a pretty aristocrat, a promising student, a playboy and a general prick. "Hey look at the guy at the end, that Yuji, isn’t he smexy? I would love to enter his pants…"


"they wouldn’t fit," Ezzo looked for the class seats, he chose one in the center and at the front. Most people with deformity in the level of Ezzo would be shy but Ezzo is different, he loves his look, he loves to be serpent like because of his past and as such he wouldn’t dream on giving up on showing off, to him he was the most beautiful creature in the room, the girl sat beside him, she didn’t had any friends for obvious reasons so what the heck.


Yuji noticed the two new arrivals, one pretty red-head and one something, "hey look over there…beauty and the beast…lets go," the group surrounding Yuji followed as he approached his 'victims' ,"hey there beauty, what are you doing with that?" he addressed the girl, referring to Ezzo, "don’t you know that the fun is over here?"


She started to blush and to stutter "I…I…I am Kara…hi…", so her name was Kara, Ezzo didn’t know that, nor did he care.


One of Yuji lackies stepped in and started to convince her to come with them and find another seat, "hey sweetie, Yuji likes you so why not leaving this monster and…" what followed would be remembered.


Ezzo started to get up, while standing he was 30 Cm taller than the lackey, he then lifted the man, turned him heads down and crushed him head on into the ground making a hole in the floor, then Ezzo simply went back to his seat and sat down, no words, no nothing. When Yuji gang tried to help their fallen friend Ezzo talked, "no…leave him there or join him."


After a minute the teacher went into class, a old man with weak eyesight, he started to explain the basics about Soul Society and the role of shinigami, he didn’t noticed the three Yuji gang members sticking from the floor.


"You totally ruined my meeting with Yuji! What the fuck were you thinking you dipshit?" Kara yelled at Ezzo after the class, annoyed that he just made her look like an idiot by planting Yuji friends in the floor.


"a question, you say this words I don’t understand but around Yuji you didn’t, why is that?" he actually didn’t knew what the meaning of those words.


She thought about telling him so that he will know how much she was pissed at him but then 2 of the 3 human plants from the class were successful in uprooting themselves from the floor and were carried away by friends to the infirmary with a scared look, could this help considered a reason for a plantation? The nick name for this move. Those sights made Kara reconsider and she decided that lying will improve survival, "no…those are good words…err…I hate Yuji…" one of the girls in Yuji fan club heard that, nothing good will come from this conversation but at least Kara won't be planted.


"I see…Kara…I am a god and you are a mortal," he put his hand under her chin, "this would never work."


He then just walked off to the cafeteria.


In the infirmary Yuji sat beside his friends who were hospitalized, "ill have that bastard head…"


A rivalry had started.


To be continued…

Shdo
03-01-2008, 01:44 PM
Chapter 3



The room lit with the morning sun, waking Kara, "what the fuck are you doing opening the window? Let me sleep its Saturday…" she turned around and went back into slumber, Ezzo didn’t cared he just bath in the morning sun, as a optimistic fellow he loved the sun since she reminded him how beautiful life were, the sun mother of all life feed the fields who feed the people who give their hearts to serpent gods in an endless cycle of…"what the fuck don’t you get in close the damn window?"


In the infirmary Yuji sat beside his comatose friend…he didn’t return to himself since he was 'planted' two days ago, "I swear ill have vengeance… you just watch me, Iko, ill have vengeance!"


2 months have passed, in those 2 months Ezzo was untouchable, his body was unusually stronger than any other student, without the teachings of how to channel reitsu the students were as weak as normal humans, in all this time Yuji couldn’t do his move, but now…


The teaching of the martial arts of the shinigami include the use of reitsu to bust your strength, allowing for high jumps, swift attacks and later Shunpo, in addition the students learned grabs, kicks, throws, punches, and combos, but the vain are always vain, "Ezzo, you must join the fighting drills, how would you defend yourself from a close combat attacker? What will you do if my assistant would charge at you right now?" a stupid question.


"Soi fon…why do I need to come with you?" Yoruichi complained to Soi fon, for some reason Soi fon decided to drag the half asleep Yoruichi to the 'hand-to-hand 101' class.


"it's important that in the first one on one exercise of the new students the head of the special ops will be present, looking for special and talented individuals as well as…" she went on and on about the reasons Soi fon should be there but didn’t explained why Yoruichi need to be there, the answer of course is that Soi fon just want to be near Yoruichi.


"it's not an answer…I am bored…" as Yoruichi said those words the door to their right, the one leading to the student training hall, got smashed as the hand to hand assistant was thrown through it, "and now I am interested again!" through the broken door entered a 2 meter tall student, with potent green eyes, a ear to ear smile and scaly skin, on top of the student another assistant who tried to choke the scaly student, it didn’t really had any effect and the student proceed to literally 'plant' the assistant head on in the floor.


"I would do this," Ezzo shouted back at the teacher who was in utter shock.


"EZZO! You attacked my assistance 'planted' another, and in front of the current 2nd division captain, the current head of the special ops AND in front of the previous one! Why?" the teacher went berserk on Ezzo, but Ezzo never was good at understanding human expressions so he couldn’t understand what the teacher truly wanted.


"You asked me what I would do if I was to be attacked," a calm voice answered.


"AND THIS IS YOUR REPLY?" the teacher was red with anger, especially when Ezzo said 'yes', but somehow this behavior and maybe his peculiar look drew the attention of Yoruichi.


"wait, you are saying that he proved you wrong in teaching him hand to hand combat?" she somehow reversed the guilt back at the instructor, "I think I can settle this one and for all, I'll have a match with him, ill show him that hand to hand combat isn’t just raw instinct."


In the arena the little practice started, "I see no point in doing this exercise, it's not my style," Ezzo complained about what he saw as some kind of ego enhancing on the behalf of the shinigami female, but its seemed people wanted to see this fight, everyone saw Ezzo refusal as a form of vanity where in fact his second tough skin (remember this!) made him slower and fast movements were uncomfortable to him, his power based technique was the result of this problem.


"too bad, its mine," Yoruichi Shunpo behind Ezzo kicking him in the neck, hopefully her weak kick wouldn’t kill the student, she used less than 10% of her strength after all he was only a student.


Yet he didn’t budge, "this is pointless…" he grabbed her leg and lifted her in the air in front of him, moving his second arm to grab her cloth and 'plant' her.


"How did you?!" Yoruichi kicked Ezzo and this time with 30% of her strength, it took 2 kicks to make him release her, "his skin…it acts like a shock absorber," again Shunpo this time all around Ezzo who didn’t moved, "everyone have weaknesses!" she reappeared on his left arm trying to dislocate his elbow, he wasn’t impressed and moved his hand while completely disregarding the extra weight trying to slam her into the ground, she had to retreat again, this time she moved behind him and with two fast powerful kicks to the back of his knees she brought him down, again she disappeared and reappeared above his face with her fist coming down, stopping a inch from his face, "you aren’t taking this serious are you?"


" just finish this practice," the answer was clear, he didn’t had fear in his voice, it's clear he will lose but he can take much more punishment, this will only lengthen the practice, Ezzo just wanted to go.


"This student get my permission to not participate in hand to hand practices, just teach him Shunpo and he will be fine," the verdict was given, a powerhouse is a powerhouse.


It was the same day evening, Ezzo went back from the public sho
wers, annoyed that he had to share his bath with people, "they have a bath for females, for males but no deities? Racists," Ezzo passed through one of the alleys, suddenly from behind him and in front of him shadows moved, he recognized one of them, "Yuji? What do you want?"


"your head," Yuji draw a metal club and his friends draw chains and other metallic objects, "we had enough of you taking the spotlight, usually we wouldn’t try anything but today we saw your weakness, you are slow! You don’t even manage to do a single Shunpo!"


"I don’t really have time for this…" suddenly Yuji disappeared, he Shunpo behind Ezzo, mimicking the movement that was seen during the noon practice, kicking Ezzo in the knees BUT…
Yuji was just a student, stronger than most students but still only a student, Ezzo didn’t fell from such a weak attack, instead he replied with a reverse back-hand punch, smashing Yuji head to the alley wall.


"YUJI!" Yuji gang started to scream as Ezzo started to punch Yuji face, again and again, slow punches with no slowing down until Yuji fell like a rag doll, Ezzo left the bloody mass, he didn’t cared for the gang cries, he simply took out the leader, the fastest and most efficient way of removing the annoyance.


In the infirmary Yuji got his face stitched up, "I am sorry," the nurse explained, "it seems that a scar would remain…" those words shattered Yuji, he loved his pretty face they were his trademark, the pretty, rich, attractive Yuji, but Now his pride was shattered.


"Ezzo…I'll kill you."


"Yuji? What are we going to do to kill that bastard?" Yuji gang sat with the scarred leader, trying to comfort him.


"I'll get the ones who are near him, his friends…the girl, she live in his room, a girlfriend or something? She is the key…" Yuji couldn't be more wrong.


Kara went to her locker, there was a letter inside, "what the fuck is that?" she opened the letter and started to blush, it was a love letter from Yuji, "oh my god…he want to meet me!" she took her shows and went to the alley Yuji wanted to meet her at.


"oh you are here," Yuji was delighted to hear her voice, "let's go for a drink…"


The next day was a big day, the academy was all worked up, a challenge was given!
When a challenge is given it can escalate to a life and death battle, Ezzo woke up from the noise of the beating at his door, he looked around, "Kara isn’t here?" she went outside yesterday and still haven’t came back, Ezzo went to the door and opened it, on the other side dozens of student stood looking exited as if they got their black kimonos a minute ago.


"Is it true? Are you going to accept?" the students yelled chaotically, looking at Ezzo if he was the messiah, he liked it.


"What is true?" he asked because frankly he didn’t know.


"The challenge! Yuji challenged you to a fight! The entire academy know about it, are you going to accept it?" their eyes sparkled; they wanted to see a real fight.


Ezzo knew that this and the previous harassments won't stop, he will need to hurt Yuji bad enough so that Yuji will leave him, "Yes I accept," the students were so happy, there would be a fight in the arena.


The arena is pretty big, it have some trees in it and look like a circular pit, on each side there is a small gate, the first one opened, Ezzo marched in, bathing in the morning sun, "this is a fucking good sun," he said to himself not knowing what it even mean, the second gate opened and Yuji entered, with a Zanpakutou! The rules of a challenge were that only what you own can be brought with you, that meaning your blade if you have one and your cloths, most students don’t have a Zanpakutou until they reach some resolve, somehow Yuji got one.


"EZZO! I'll have your head today, you see this Zanpakutou? It's my resolve to kill you…we will have our fight to the death!"


"I refuse, you have a Zanpakutou, I don’t, this fight wouldn’t be fair I redraw my part in this fight," Ezzo started to turn away but Yuji appeared again before him, Shunpo, blocking him.


"Your little girlfriend…Kara? She is dead…I killed her!" the voice was almost a whisper, no one heard it beside Ezzo, "so what are you going to do? FIGHT ME!" the crowd roared with excitement, to them it looked like a great show.


"Why?" the single word from Ezzo crushed into Yuji face like a guillotine blade.


"Wh…she…I killed her and you don’t care? She was your girlfriend!" the empty words were thrown to Ezzo who went past Yuji, ignoring him and moving to the gate.


"Girlfriend? What is that?" the cold reaction shattered Yuji.


"I…I killed her because of you! I KILLED HER FOR YOU TO FIGHT ME!" this shout was heard by the audience, 'murder?' the mumbled 'could it be?' some students went to call the teachers and the inside police, too bad they would miss what was about to happen.


"Ez-kun, let's play!" the memories of his childhood rushed back to him, memories of killing in his name, Ezzo turned his head to Yuji, his eyes burning with rage.


"in MY NAME? WHO GAVE YOU PREMISSION TO TAINT MY NAME WITH THIS!" he charged at Yuji without thinking, raged over something similar that happened in his past but Yuji pulled himself together drawing his blade and cutting at the charging enemy face, a slice of flesh fell, on the ground the left cheek of Ezzo was laying, Ezzo jumped back holding his left side of the face, he took his hand off revealing a normal face under the second layer of scaly skin, some blood started to flow from the wound.


"So this is how this feel, the sun on your face and the wind touching the skin…it hinder me."


With those words Ezzo started to tear his second skin, dropping his cloths and ripping his skin, revealing a tanned moist skin underneath, Yuji could only look in horror as in front of him Ezzo ripped his own face, torso and legs, and then he disappeared, for the first time in his life, Ezzo second skin didn’t hindered him, he moved faster and hit faster, he had grace strength and brutality that Yuji couldn’t handle with, so Yuji did the only thing he could do.
He released.


"SPARKLE! LIGHTNING DRAGON!" the blade changed, a empty space started to fill the center of the blade, making the blade look like two thin blades in spoon-like position, electricity started to sparkle from the blade and a jolt of blue electricity was fired at Ezzo crushing him into the wall, "I DON’T CARE! I WANT TO KILL YOU EZZO!"


Ezzo started to rise from the ashes, dust still covered everything, just like blood covered his body, the tearing of the skin had him also tearing some of the first layer of skin, blood flowed down, "so this is how pain feel…you feel it really different then I used to…I find this interesting," in Ezzo hand there was something, the dust dissipated uncovering the item in Ezzo hand, a blood red Zanpakutou with green jades over the hilt, "I am going to share this feeling with you."

Shdo
03-01-2008, 01:47 PM
chapter 4


Blood covered the arena ground, at one end stood Yuji with his jolting released Zanpakutou, the young aristocrat was terrified at what stood before him on the other side of the arena. In front of him stood Ezzo, covered with his own blood and at his feet lied his old upper torso 'suit' of skin, it was a horrific sight for young Yuji, "What the hell are you?!" he screamed in terror at his opponent.


"I am who I always was, the serpent god," he took a step towards Yuji, "the bringer of the morning sun," another step followed, "god of resurrection and the crop cycles, eater of human heart BUT most importantly…" he draw his sword, a slightly reddish metallic blade, "I am the one who will butcher you."


"Don’t play with me!" Yuji blade started to buzz with a clearly visible electricity strings and he would have shot at Ezzo if he was in front of Yuji but there was only air.


"I said I would share this wonderful feeling with you," a whisper came from behind, yuji looked and saw Ezzo standing behind him hurling his blade to Yuji stomach. Yuji tried to evade but his side was cut by Ezzo blade. Now both bleed at the arena floor.


"How can it be? How can a freak like you beat me like this?" Ezzo looked puzzled at the question. now without the second skin Ezzo facial expressions were a little extreme, the result of years of trying to get some kind of a movement on the second skin face.


"Isn’t it obvious? Because I am better then you," the words echoed in Yuji mind. Could it be? The bright star of the 2154th year of the academy, the heir of the Akihabra noble family, is nothing but trash before this monster?


All lies, that what he thought, this isn’t happening, I am the strongest in our class, I am the strongest there is! Yuji charged at Ezzo, their swords clashed releasing lightning sparks as well as small metal sparks, "no one is better then me! You are a freak and ill deal with you as one!" the area started to jolt up with electricity as Ezzo blood vessels started to erupt under the pressure and then, enough blood was spilled.


It is said that one Zanpakutou represent one soul, not only by behavior but in essence, so does ezpanitl, Ezzo blade, it’s a sleeping sword much like him. Ezzo have…had a second skin, that skin caused him to not feel anything, no pain and no comfort as well as no cold and no warmth, it was undisturbed for years and now it was released. Where another would feel this pain as something horrible Ezzo found great joy since he was shielded all his life from both friends and enemies.
It's so exhilarating to be cut, the feel of the torn skin and the fire in the nerves is like a constant proof of how wonderful life is. And such his Zanpakutou works, it thrive on torn and bleeding flesh, of both the enemy and Ezzo, of the symbol of fighting, blood.


"teezio, ezpanitl," Ezzo blade started to shine in bright red and his reitsu went through the roof. An explosion of reitsu kicked Yuji back. Yuji looked at the release. The blade changed into a 75 cm club, it was pure black with golden lines that passed through the club exterior. On the sides of the club there were small black triangles, each resembled the shape of a shark tooth.


"You think this thing scares me?" Yuji was full of himself. He started to charge his blade again.


"the blood of conflict is my fuel, quizozo…" with this command the true power of ezpanitl manifest, all the blood that covered the battle field started to boil, it turn into red fumes which swirl around Ezzo blade, around and around they swirl until they enter the black triangles, turning them into bright crimson color.
"This is my blade and like me the more blood is spilled the more it become alive."


"DON’T KID WITH ME!" Yuji charges at Ezzo and Ezzo return the favor.


above the walls of the arena the officers of the gotei watched the fight. They are here for quite some, assessing the power of the combatants and waiting to join in case the 'good' guy loses. There won't be such case. "he is strong," a bald one say.
"it's impressive such a powerful shinigami is just 2 months into the academy first year, I don’t think we had such a person…we never had such a person even the child prodigy took some years and this one…" a pretty shinigami replied.
Behind them their captain stood, "he is already at fifth seat power level…I like him," the eye patched captain smiled with a maniac grin, "I want him in my squad…"


The two combatants clashed and blood sprayed across the arena as several members of the audience vomited at the site, Yuji severed arm…no…severed right shoulder still held his sword tightly as if it still wanted to fight on but the only sound Yuji could make was those of screams of pain. "isn’t it wonderful?" Ezzo smiled above the dismembered opponent, "the pain isn’t it great? Isn’t it wonderful to be alive? I enjoy this so much," Yuji eyes were full with tears of pain; Ezzo eyes were full with tears of joy, "the power of my blade is to use the blood that was spilled to amplify its strength, you can't resist it."


"you don’t have to kill him," a woman voice came from behind him, "your friend was found alive," it was that tanned woman from before.


"this got nothing to do with her," he said as his blade started to rise in the air, "that fool thought he can do something and call it in my name…its sacred you know?" in a blink of an eye the blade went down ripping Yuji in two from head to bottom, "my name, that is…"

Revan1990
03-01-2008, 07:18 PM
well what should i say, shdo? As great as allways...i really like to read ur story's xD