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Llama
02-21-2008, 02:58 AM
This poem I wrote is Bleach inspired.

No Shaking Throne

He has already taken over once.
I can hear him in my head.
Everyday he gets louder and closer.
Consuming my heart, body, and soul.
Shaking throne.

Everything I hold dear will be destroyed.
Soon there will be nothing left of me.
I can not hold him in much longer.
He wants out, he wants to be king.
Shaking throne.

He has taken over again.
This has to stop.
I must push him to the core of my soul.
Otherwise my life will spiral out of control.
Shaking throne.

We come face to face.
I fight him but to no avale.
The roles of the king and horse are switching.
My resolve is missing something, instinct.
Shaking throne.

Instinct, the one thing I resisted but need most now.
I call upon it and beat him down.
He threatens to crush my skull if I ever let up.
But I will not let that happen, that I promise.
No shaking throne.


By: Caleb Smith aka Llama

Miyona
02-21-2008, 11:06 PM
Nice poem Llama^^

Llama
02-22-2008, 02:33 AM
Thanks, I find it kind of funny all this all came to me during my 20th Century History class.

earthforge
02-29-2008, 05:46 AM
Good poem. The measure works well for it. My only reccomendation is to be a bit more vague and then it would be great.