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tari101190
10-16-2007, 08:42 PM
i wanted to wrote a fanfiction centred around these 3 adoptive brothers i guess...i have only drawn 2 so far. plus thses are just begining stage sketches. they're alright imo, i've gotten better then i used to ba atleast (i hope). i hope you'll like these sketches, and i hope you'll like the fann fiction which will come later.

these are just sketches, so no colour, no major detail etc...they are just protoype-ish so they'll differ slightly than their final design.

btw they're not traced, but i did try to copy kubo's amazing style.

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i wanted to give him a unique look. like sleeveless...although tousen/hisagi/9th divison basically own that look already.
so i went for the shorter sleeves. as in they're shorter than normal.
the right arm sleeve (on the left) is a bit too long in the pic i guess...
the large sash around the chest/waist should'e been a bit lower than i made it maybe...
and confused how to do those shinigami trousers though btw...

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this pic is more simple than the first, but i like this one more...
i hate the head though.
the hollow mask fragment is messed, and the face is messy.

i will fix them up/improve them later then post the edits...
ok look...if you havn't figured it out already...i can't draw faces, feet or hands well (if at all)!!!

plz leave (positive) comments...

*i just figured out how to use the scanner!!!

fan fiction info
btw the fiinal brothers name is saimei.
so they're sai, kai and tai.
kaito was originally gonna be called daichi btw...
but i decided they're sensei will be nakamura daisuke.

sais is a quincy btw.
in the begining daisuke noticed they all had some noticeable reiryoku, although sai was better thanthe other 2 cos he was a quincy. he didn't no at the time though obviously, his excellent manipulation of reishi gave him away i guess. plus his real name will be german maybe.

the three boys are adopted by daisuke so they have real names, but changed to these names.

during a training session a powerful hollow attacks...due to some stuff, dai and kai end up dying.

kai is immediaely sent to soul society, believeing the others all died, like permanently dead, not like him. kai eventually manifests a zapakuto.

tai blacked out and woke up in huenco mundo. he protected hiself against hollows or a while. but constant ffighting and using his powers eventually coroded his chain, aking him a hollow. his corrupted hollow mind made him think sai and kai let him die.

sai stays on earth, knowing his brothers are dead.

- kai wants to become strong to protect ppl close to him nxt time.
- sai wants to get strong to prove to his brothers, which he believes he'll see again, he's strong enough to prtotect them now.
- tiai aka lynx wants to get strong so he can kill sai and kai, whom(??) he believes are still live on earth, to get revenge for leting him die. he will get ny power he can no matter what for this goal. even become an arrancar.

daisuke is a mysterious hermit. dunno what he is...he could either be human, quincy, shinigami, hollow (how...i dunno), arrancar, vizard even bounto. you'll find out eventually i guess. either way he can use kido...and he's quite skilled at it. thats not a clue to what he is btw, any1 can use kido.

eventualy the best outcome is if they all meet up again, which will be weird seeing as they each dnt nothe status if eachother. (like dead, shinigami, hollow etc...)

sai is my fave btw.
his quincy bow is a crossboy, not a standard bow.
plus he's like the 'naruto' of the group, so he's opposite to ishida's personality.

kai is the sasuke type guy, but he still has a big heart.

i dunno wat tai was b4 he became a hollow...but as lynx he's evil obviously. but not moody evil. he's similar to grimmjow style.

btw all three ofthses guys are like panthera (gianit cats...) type animals.
sai - crossbow = silber gebard (silver cheetah)
kai - zanpakuto = hionte no shishi (lion of the blaze)
tai - name = lynx (the animal...)
- zanpakuto = dunno about his zanpakuto yet.
need to think of an appropriate cat.

ZarakiKenpachi
10-16-2007, 08:53 PM
dude i cant draw for shnarf!

so these look awsm to me

Kolbertt
10-16-2007, 09:18 PM
OHhh you've showed them to everyone -( make them PLAY the rpg instead .P

alsooo, the hollow one is already an arrancar ?o.O naaa make him a hollow first and show his improvement little by little _P , I plan to do that with my little Azul =) I've already have her semi-gillian, gillian, gillian - adjuchas and arrancar form planed .) (when we get to see an original Vasto Lorde I'll design her as well .P)

SPOILERR _P
Azul will change her name when she becomes an arrancar. And her Zanpakuto will be an oversized chakram used as blade ring named... V-LK---A OoO!!! (who can guess it =??)

tari101190
10-16-2007, 09:25 PM
for the rpg -
kai dnt no shikai/bankai
lynx/tai isnt an arrancar, he is just a hollow.

a need more points to get shikai/bankai/menos status/arrncar form anyway.

the fiction will be lightly different to the rpg...i dnt contrlwhathappens to them exactly so how could it be ? lol

i based them on these guys anyway.

Rain
10-16-2007, 09:48 PM
Those are pretty good tari, I can see a bit of the kubo-style in them

Make sure to post the final versions when you get them done, I want to see them

Dizzy
10-16-2007, 11:32 PM
Well, the only thing I have to say is learn some anatomy, and you'll improve a crazy lot. For now, I suppose it isn't bad for a beginner.

Also, lulz valkyria.

Kolbertt
10-17-2007, 12:49 AM
too damned easy .p but it doesn't really matter, since my real proudness comes from the pictures of her (droolllsss...)

If things go accordingly, I'll post them at the Rpg thread, but if I get bored, I'll end up writting a fanfic as well... (with pictures)

Primera Espada
10-17-2007, 05:00 AM
looks neat, I'll comment more after this weekend (when I have free time)

Riekie
10-17-2007, 07:19 AM
Nice work there Tari;) I can't draw for shiz so this is pretty good!

scooz
10-18-2007, 04:51 PM
These look good, through Lynx's mask might need some work. The Arrancar skull masks take on very definitive shapes, and the edges of his are a bit...fuzzy. It looks like you were trying to make it spikey, so just give it some defined lines. Other than that, you did a good job on these ^^

HarryPotter
10-19-2007, 05:16 PM
Great designs! I really like the arrancar guy, his clothing is really cool and original.

tari101190
10-23-2007, 03:03 PM
the arrancar guy will be based on a spanish/iberian lynx...so his name is lynx...and he's spanish...

i want the arrancar guy to have a zanpakuto like this -
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/6599/kadajs20souba20double20nx0.gif (http://imageshack.us/)

i want the zanpakuto and the release command to be -

mutilar, salvaje bestia
mutialte/maim, savage/wild beast/animal

but i dunno spanish so i dunno if this is correct...

Kolbertt
10-23-2007, 11:12 PM
Spanish translations:
Command:
Mutila (Mutilate, this one should be english or Japanese though :P)

As for the names:
Fiera (Wild Animal)
Bestia Salvaje (Wild beast, You got the spelling right just wrong word order)
Animal (animal, this one is the same in both languages)

If you need any other help with spanish don't hesitate to ask .)

tari101190
10-24-2007, 12:14 PM
omg thanx

so its...
Bestia Salvaje

i didn't notice the release commands were still in japanese though...
now i need to no mutilate or maim in japanese...i asked spacecat for help...

he said Kirisaku - to tear/rip to pieces etc...thats closest to mutilate/maim apparently

tari101190
11-15-2007, 08:29 PM
kai version 2...(when i scan images they come out blurred)

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/1274/13499401qy3.png
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/4737/23009501gj8.png

Kolbertt
11-15-2007, 08:47 PM
I see Kiraaa .P

great improvements since the last time-

tari101190
03-05-2008, 04:07 PM
new (better?) versions of kai and lynx...

http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/7724/kaibs0.th.bmp (http://img507.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kaibs0.bmp)http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1024/lynxrf3.th.bmp (http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lynxrf3.bmp)

kai is sporting a not so common look among the soul society shinigami.

lynx is prety basic, but is tryin out a collar...just tryin it outfor now...

both unfinished.

havn't mastered (or learn't...) how to do hands or feet yet.

tari101190
03-28-2008, 09:45 PM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/1995/kailz1.th.png (http://img410.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kailz1.png)http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9530/lynxei7.th.png (http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lynxei7.png)

and

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/9752/kaipk8.png (http://imageshack.us/)
i used a sketch of renji to do this one...

DeadlyRukia
03-29-2008, 05:14 AM
wow they r good^^...

the second one reminds me aristar from d. gray man ^^'