McDoogle
08-01-2007, 10:44 PM
Ok, ive had this idea for an ark in my head now for quite a while, actually before i started reading the manga, just so happends that the manga was at the point i wanted it to be :) But ive started this fan fiction from chapter 285, at the end of the Ichigo v GJ fight...
From leading off the last line or so from chapter 285...
Faced With all he's faced in the past, and with all the trails he's overcome, in order to to take hold of his fufure, HE CAN'T LOSE!!
(ichigo renches Zangestu into grimjaw)
Continueing from there onto Chapter 286...
Chapter 286 - Unwilling Of The Dead
(Grimjaw falls to the ground sortly following ichigo due to exaustion)
(Ichigo Slowly stands while the remainder of his mask crumbles)
Nel : ( While diving towards ichigo in a panic, She grabs onto him as tightly as posible) Ichi-go...
Orhime : (Slowly walking over, ichigo looks up and is greeted by a heart warming smile followed by beginings of tears) Thank you, Ichigo
Ichigo : (Ichigo responds by a smile which is interrupted by nel hurting ichigo through his wounds) ( a small cry of pain) Ahhh! Nel!.... it's ok....
( In the background, the sound of feet/shoes against the ground gain ichigo's, nel, and Orhime's attention)
Grimmjaw : You Bastard.... Looks like i did underestimate you... But you've also lost your mask... I told You,You'll Never be Able to Defeat Me!
( Grimjaw Rushes towards ichigo with his remaining strength, ichigo standing in a stance with zangestu in one hand and nel in another, preparing for grimjaw's final efforts to kill him, Moments before Grimjaw reaches ichigo,. Grimjaw is taken by a fallen blow up the chest spontaneously, all 4 in shock, and falls to the ground once more, In a Blur, stands a person of resemblance to ichigo but unable to identify who it is.}
Chapter 287 - The Escape
Orhime : Shinji!!!
Ichigo : (In Further Shock) Shinji!?!?!?!
(As Shinji Turns around, Orihime reconises the mask in resemblance to ichigo's and becomes releaved)
Grimjaw : ( Falling uncouncous, also reconising the mask which shinji holds) Teh.....
Hiyori : (Hitting Ichigo over the back of the head with her sandle with ichigo falling to the ground, then turning around while his vision begins to clear to see the group of Vaizards including one other) Dick Head! What the fuck are you doing! Do you honestly think you can come here and have 10 Second fights with everyone and expect to win!?
Ichigo : Everyone!? What are you doing here?
Shinji : Stopping you from doing something stupid... After that little note you sent i knew you would end up killing your self so i decided to come...
Ichigo : (Staring at the unfamiliar person) Who's he?
Shinji : That's Hayato, he's plan B for you.
(Hayato stares blankly into open space Igorantly, Ichigo with a face of distgust) Not very Socible is he....
Hiyori : Shut up, dick head, if it wasnt for you, we wouldnt need him!
(In the background, a rupturing sound sends silence and fixates everyone onto one position, Ulquiorra apears from a large black hole in a opening on what seems the be space, Looking around he sees Grimjaw unconsous dieing and a collection of people around ichigo, again, recognizing the mask of which Shinji still holds upon his face, Immediately, Ulquiorra Intercepts Shinji and colliding with his zapaktou)
Shinji : Get Ichigo and the Rest Out of Here! NOW!
Ichigo : OY! Wait!
Hiyori : Shut up, Dick Head! (Ichigo is knocked un-counsous by another hit of Hiyori's sandle)
Kensei : You know, that probably wasn't necessary...
Hiyori: So...?
(With Hachi carrying ichigo and Nel, The group of Vaizards excluding Shinji and Hayato, run off into emty Hueco Mundo)
Chapter 288: Orihime's Mission
(Hayato walks up to Orhime)
Hayato : You, Girl, come with me...
Orihime : Huh? Wheres ichigo going?
Hayato : (sighs, Picks up Orihime and walks off into a consealed area)
Orihime : Hey! Hey! Wait!
( A large noise in the background Represents the conflict between Shinji and Ulquiorra)
Hayato : I need you to do something...
Orihime : Huh?
Hayato : Your abilities contain the power to reverse of reject the existance of something happening such as injuries, correct?
Orihime : (Looking in astonishment questioning in her own mind on the reason for his knowlege) Yea....
Hayato : Because of your unique abilities and being the only one with the opportunities, you must slow down azien's production of the arracar in order for Social Society and Ichigo to prepare for the fight between Hueco Mundo and Social Society, without it, Aizen will be able to attack Social Society within a matter of weeks. Not yet has the Hōgyoku fully awoken but its effect upon the arracar are clear.
{Orihime becomes sure and realizes her future doings represented by the expression on her face)
Hayato : You know what you must do.... But you may also know that your abilities are not further enough developed to fully erase the existence of the Hōgyoku, that is why you must deny their effects upon the arracar as much as possible and avoid the aid of the Hōgyoku's awakening, without your helping, Social Society will be destroyed and the in-balancing of the two worlds will begin, shortly after, destablisation and destruction of all worlds will commence.
{Knowing what she must do, Orihime proceeds to a safe location awaiting collection from a another arracar, meanwhile, Hayato sets off to catch up with the group leaving Shinji to fight Ulquiorra knowing the outcome but also trusting shinji.)
I will post Fan Fiction chapter 289 when I've finished typing it up.
Feedback appreciated ;)
From leading off the last line or so from chapter 285...
Faced With all he's faced in the past, and with all the trails he's overcome, in order to to take hold of his fufure, HE CAN'T LOSE!!
(ichigo renches Zangestu into grimjaw)
Continueing from there onto Chapter 286...
Chapter 286 - Unwilling Of The Dead
(Grimjaw falls to the ground sortly following ichigo due to exaustion)
(Ichigo Slowly stands while the remainder of his mask crumbles)
Nel : ( While diving towards ichigo in a panic, She grabs onto him as tightly as posible) Ichi-go...
Orhime : (Slowly walking over, ichigo looks up and is greeted by a heart warming smile followed by beginings of tears) Thank you, Ichigo
Ichigo : (Ichigo responds by a smile which is interrupted by nel hurting ichigo through his wounds) ( a small cry of pain) Ahhh! Nel!.... it's ok....
( In the background, the sound of feet/shoes against the ground gain ichigo's, nel, and Orhime's attention)
Grimmjaw : You Bastard.... Looks like i did underestimate you... But you've also lost your mask... I told You,You'll Never be Able to Defeat Me!
( Grimjaw Rushes towards ichigo with his remaining strength, ichigo standing in a stance with zangestu in one hand and nel in another, preparing for grimjaw's final efforts to kill him, Moments before Grimjaw reaches ichigo,. Grimjaw is taken by a fallen blow up the chest spontaneously, all 4 in shock, and falls to the ground once more, In a Blur, stands a person of resemblance to ichigo but unable to identify who it is.}
Chapter 287 - The Escape
Orhime : Shinji!!!
Ichigo : (In Further Shock) Shinji!?!?!?!
(As Shinji Turns around, Orihime reconises the mask in resemblance to ichigo's and becomes releaved)
Grimjaw : ( Falling uncouncous, also reconising the mask which shinji holds) Teh.....
Hiyori : (Hitting Ichigo over the back of the head with her sandle with ichigo falling to the ground, then turning around while his vision begins to clear to see the group of Vaizards including one other) Dick Head! What the fuck are you doing! Do you honestly think you can come here and have 10 Second fights with everyone and expect to win!?
Ichigo : Everyone!? What are you doing here?
Shinji : Stopping you from doing something stupid... After that little note you sent i knew you would end up killing your self so i decided to come...
Ichigo : (Staring at the unfamiliar person) Who's he?
Shinji : That's Hayato, he's plan B for you.
(Hayato stares blankly into open space Igorantly, Ichigo with a face of distgust) Not very Socible is he....
Hiyori : Shut up, dick head, if it wasnt for you, we wouldnt need him!
(In the background, a rupturing sound sends silence and fixates everyone onto one position, Ulquiorra apears from a large black hole in a opening on what seems the be space, Looking around he sees Grimjaw unconsous dieing and a collection of people around ichigo, again, recognizing the mask of which Shinji still holds upon his face, Immediately, Ulquiorra Intercepts Shinji and colliding with his zapaktou)
Shinji : Get Ichigo and the Rest Out of Here! NOW!
Ichigo : OY! Wait!
Hiyori : Shut up, Dick Head! (Ichigo is knocked un-counsous by another hit of Hiyori's sandle)
Kensei : You know, that probably wasn't necessary...
Hiyori: So...?
(With Hachi carrying ichigo and Nel, The group of Vaizards excluding Shinji and Hayato, run off into emty Hueco Mundo)
Chapter 288: Orihime's Mission
(Hayato walks up to Orhime)
Hayato : You, Girl, come with me...
Orihime : Huh? Wheres ichigo going?
Hayato : (sighs, Picks up Orihime and walks off into a consealed area)
Orihime : Hey! Hey! Wait!
( A large noise in the background Represents the conflict between Shinji and Ulquiorra)
Hayato : I need you to do something...
Orihime : Huh?
Hayato : Your abilities contain the power to reverse of reject the existance of something happening such as injuries, correct?
Orihime : (Looking in astonishment questioning in her own mind on the reason for his knowlege) Yea....
Hayato : Because of your unique abilities and being the only one with the opportunities, you must slow down azien's production of the arracar in order for Social Society and Ichigo to prepare for the fight between Hueco Mundo and Social Society, without it, Aizen will be able to attack Social Society within a matter of weeks. Not yet has the Hōgyoku fully awoken but its effect upon the arracar are clear.
{Orihime becomes sure and realizes her future doings represented by the expression on her face)
Hayato : You know what you must do.... But you may also know that your abilities are not further enough developed to fully erase the existence of the Hōgyoku, that is why you must deny their effects upon the arracar as much as possible and avoid the aid of the Hōgyoku's awakening, without your helping, Social Society will be destroyed and the in-balancing of the two worlds will begin, shortly after, destablisation and destruction of all worlds will commence.
{Knowing what she must do, Orihime proceeds to a safe location awaiting collection from a another arracar, meanwhile, Hayato sets off to catch up with the group leaving Shinji to fight Ulquiorra knowing the outcome but also trusting shinji.)
I will post Fan Fiction chapter 289 when I've finished typing it up.
Feedback appreciated ;)